PINOCCHIO

CATEGORY	4	3	2	1	POINTS
Organization	The story is very well organized. One idea or scene follows another in a logical sequence with clear transitions.	The story is pretty well organized. One idea or scene may seem out of place. Clear transitions are used.	The story is a little hard to follow. The transitions are sometimes not clear.	Ideas and scenes seem to be randomly arranged.	3
Elements of Folk Tales	At least three of the elements of folk tales discussed in class are included in the story.	Two of the elements of folk tales discussed in class are included in the story.	Only one of the elements of folk tales discussed in class are included in the story.	There are no elements of folk tales discussed in class included in the story.	4
Spelling and Punctuation	There are no spelling or punctuation errors in the final draft.	There is one spelling or punctuation error in the final draft.	There are twothree spelling and punctuation errors in the final draft.	The final draft has more than three spelling and punctuation errors.	4
Neatness	The final draft of t he story is readable, clean, neat and attractive. It is free of erasures and crossed-out words. It looks like the author took great pride in it.	The final draft of the story is readable, neat and attractive. It may have one or two erasures, but they are not distracting. It looks like the author took some pride in it.	The final draft of the story is readable and some of the pages are attractive. It looks like parts of it might have been done in a hurry.	The final draft is not neat or attractive. It looks like the student just wanted to get it done and didn't care what it looked like.	3

TOTAL

14

Teacher Comments

Pinocchio is a nice story gives us a great lesson about lying and how the lies are not the way to get what we want.